In my series, the Hero and Villain battle each, one on one, a lot:
Book 5
1 - The Villain is first introduced in the midst of a huge battle The Hero takes him head on before being beat back.
2 - After the battle goes on for a while longer, it becomes apparent that evil will triumph in this segment. The Hero once again attacks the Villain only to be slowly and brutally killed as the remaining forces of good retreat.
Book 6
3 - The Hero is brought back to life stronger than before and engages the Villain as they are now equally match. Here, the Villain's army step in causing the two to lose sight of each other.
4 - The two find each other and engage in a devastating duel which destroys much of London in the process. Both become weak and tired from the fight before the Villain is forced back behind his army.
5 - Once the Hero vanquishes the Villain's leader and source of power, the Hero and Villain clash in a very one sided fist fight. After toying with the weak Villain, the Hero executes him ending the conflict.
My question is, do you think this is too much? Would you combine the 4th and 5th encounter into one? Leave your opinions below.
Gender:
Points: 300
Reviews: 0