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When writing, what is your most difficult challenge?



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Thu Mar 18, 2010 5:38 pm
GryphonFledgling says...



Developing character relationships, specifically changing character relationships, without making it too heavyhanded. Having a group of characters go from being uncomfortable to really close. Yeah, it's the hardest part for me.

That and political intrigue. I can't write political intrigue to save my life. *headdesk*
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Thu Mar 18, 2010 8:20 pm
Fishr says...



Finishing, and tense. Both are the suck.
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Fri Mar 19, 2010 3:18 pm
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Ending without sucking.
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And miles to go before I sleep.
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Fri Mar 19, 2010 3:58 pm
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The Plot. I'm two chapters into the story and then, "Wait a second... I have a better idea!" I can't even start Chapter 1 without another pop up.
  





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Jagged says...



Seconding on plot being hard. I seem incapable of writing anything longer than three thousand words without getting discouraged or losing interest mid-way through.
Endings too. Agonizing over the last sentence of a story gets tiring.
Also, my hate for dialogue is unending. I just can't make it sound natural, no matter how much I try. I've been working on it, but my abilities in that field are still dismal.
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Tue Apr 27, 2010 1:04 am
Hydey says...



Finishing it. Ug, once I start a story, I rarley finish it. Also, trying to get myself to present it to others. Yeah, :oops: I'm shy like that.
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Mon Jul 12, 2010 4:48 pm
*coco says...



Same as Hydey, I'm having SUCH a hard time finishing my novel which is really sad because 1) I love it and I want to see it finished, 2) I know what I have to do to complete it but for some reason I'm finding it really difficult to project what I have in my head, onto the computer screen :x

I've always found this difficult, but I think in the course of writing my novel I've realised how big of a problem it really is. My advice to anyone wanting some; don't start a novel if you're a new writer! Short stories are the best way to find your voice and develop your writing. Gah, if only someone would've told me that before :(
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Tue Jul 13, 2010 3:22 pm
Krupp says...



For me, the problem has always been having the sin of ADD. I can come up with a universe of ideas and expound on them and complete and entire novel in my head; the trouble is actually getting it down on paper and writing it.
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Tue Jul 13, 2010 3:38 pm
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I only write short stories, but that's because I can't write a decent plot-driven piece to save my life at the moment and I'm so guilty of purple prose sometimes. I've got better at avoiding the latter, I think, over the years, but now I just stick to short, descriptive stories. I haven't written anything over 1500 words in a few years.
  





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Mon Oct 04, 2010 1:15 am
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I have to many problems to name but, here are a few:

1) Beginning it. I seriously take at least 2 months to write a chapter of anything I make. Creating the characters and making other people know the characters before any action happens.
2) Like someone said, the tone of voice. When I have a sarcastic tone of voice one day, it turns into a emotional tone the next day.
3) I try editing before I'm even done it. Then, I usually start writing something else and I never finish anything else.

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Mon Oct 04, 2010 2:09 am
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Properly refining the ideas. Without ruining the poem.
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Mon Oct 04, 2010 3:05 am
Calligraphy says...



Everything except those few hours every few days when I just write and write without stopping.
  





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Wed Oct 06, 2010 2:37 am
AuroraOrodel says...



TIME! Being in college has done a real number on my writing. In high school I could write for hours, but now I hardly have an hour to do my homework! I have to wait for gaps between when I'm working on shows or projects to really write, and it's depressing.
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Wed Oct 06, 2010 4:18 am
cannoncomplex says...



1. male characters...I have a hard time on how to make them realistic. Even if i make one, i always have the sense that they act feminine or not too masculine. I can make excellent female characters but not males.

2. the first drafts are killers... especially if the context fade out as time passes.
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Wed Oct 06, 2010 11:52 pm
MeanMrMustard says...



I would have said first drafts a long time ago, but something occurred between point A and point B that has long removed the difficulty there. What happens now is that each story presents itself and has its own unique problems. Once I figured out what my "voice" was, it's conquering the theme in both plot and writing that became the challenge; now it just comes naturally. If the story is decent enough and I handle the mental half of writing first, it more or less writes itself in a skeletal version. Now the most difficult part is making sure the presented draft to whoever reads it is reflective of my abilities, quite nerve wracking as I'm sure everyone knows. :? An additional pair of eyes and an unbiased mind is the source of the greatest advice a writer will ever receive, IMO.
  








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