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Wed Dec 31, 2008 3:08 am
moon jumper says...



Alright I found this somewhere, but can't remember. BUT, it is by this guy named Randy Ingermanson, so I'm just paraphrasing it.

Step 1) One sentence summary.
Shorter is better - about 15 words.
No character names!

Step 2) Expand to a paragraph summary.
Put setup, disasters, and ending in there.
*Some people might like the 3 disasters + the end, each disaster takes up a quarter and so does the end.

Step 3) Meet your character.
The character's name
A one-sentence summary of the character's storyline
The character's motivation (what does he/she want abstractly?)
The character's goal (what does he/she want concretely?)
The character's conflict (what prevents him/her from reaching this goal?)
The character's epiphany (what will he/she learn, how will he/she change?
A one-paragraph summary of the character's storyline

Step 4) More expanding...
Expand each sentence of your summary into a paragraph.

Step 5) Socialize with the character.
Make a one page description of each main character, and a half page for minor characters.

Step 6) Another expansion...
Expand each paragraph from step 4 into a full page.

Step 7) Know your character.
Make a full page character chart with everything there is to know about your character: birth date, description, history, motivation, goal, etc. Most importantly, how will this character change by the end of the novel?

Step 8) Spread sheeting
Now you make a spreadsheet of scenes that will come out of your four-page summary.
One column - POV character
Another - what goes on
More - expected pages

Step 9) I don't like this step because I find it very boring, and does nothing for the story.

Step 10) On your mark, get set, GO!
Now you start typing. The guy says that the first draft with the outline is much better than the third draft without an outline.

SO USE THE OUTLINE!

Hope this helps...
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Wed Dec 31, 2008 9:34 pm
Manzanna says...



This is actually quite handy, I was looking for something to help me get going on my short story.
http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/art/snowflake.php
Thats the link for the whole dealio. :)
  





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Wed Dec 31, 2008 10:51 pm
moon jumper says...



OH. I must have found it here. Oops. Haha.
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Thu Jan 01, 2009 6:08 am
Manzanna says...



No worries.
It is handy though. I've been using it this evening, and I've actually accomplished something.
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Thu Jan 01, 2009 6:36 pm
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Great! I've been using it and its helped me too!
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Sun Jan 04, 2009 12:16 am
Mars says...



I love this method :D Even though I never can get past step 7.
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