I've been re-reading the original Kidnapped, and I've noticed I do a LOT of telling and very, very little showing.
The story is a romance, so there are a lot of complex emotions I have to somehow get across. I mostly did this by having my MC be extremely insightful and 'tell' the readers what's going on. >_> Which is bad.
So, can anyone tell me how I can 'show' when using a first person narration style?
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