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help needed - teen fiction story



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Sat Oct 12, 2019 11:46 pm
northlee says...



greetings there! i am new to YWS, but i was hoping i could request some help. i could really use some help on developing a story as well as making longer chapters for this story. i can write a chapter or too, but they aren't very long as well as i usually get writer's block for most stories and have trouble continuing the story.

thank you for your time and for reading this post :)
  








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It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
— JRR Tolkien