So basically I have an idea for a fiction horror story and I wanted feedback on the idea.
Alice wakes up from a dream about a wonderland, that felt real. She tries to just shake it off. As she strolls around the woods she feels someone following her...she turns around and it’s a man. Almost furry looking with gleaming red eyes, fangs dripping the blood of what seemed to be fresh deer meat, she knew he wasn’t human. He begins chasing her and she trips and falls into a hole near a tree covered in cobwebs. She blacks out...as she awakes, she is chained to what seems to be a hospital chair. As she looks around and regains her sight, there are humans...in card costumes, dirty and almost bruised looking. They’re attacking creatures in cages...creatures that seem to strike a memory inside of alice. A queen bearing hearts on her clothes sits and watches as the damage takes place, constantly glancing over at her. She takes another look around and she begins to remember...the hatter, he’s being forced to make hats constantly and beaten every time the queen says its ugly.....the hare, shaking in a corner wishing he would be allowed to drink the poison tea....and the white rabbit. The one chasing her in the woods....keeping track of time although his watch was broken....and more. All of her friends...yes...it all came back to her. She was in wonderland...but she wondered what happened? Alice manages to break the chains loose and run for the door in time before the queen stopped her and sent her guards after her. Alice runs into the mushroom forest searching for any escapees. She finds Absolem and the chesire cat...but they look much different. Absolem is aging quite rapidly as the cheshire cat’s grin becomes smaller and smaller. They give her advice on how to save wonderland although she doesn’t want to believe it was the same place. So Absolem takes her back through time to show her the change...she knew that she needed to save wonderland, but how you may ask? One thing she didn’t realize is the the new wonderland has a tendency to mess with your mind...Alice sets out on a second adventure to save herself, her friends, and the rest of wonderland.
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