So a few days ago I let my best friend read the first chapter to my story Luna. She said she loved it, but there was too much description.
My first reaction was "What?! Too much description?" She promised that it was good and that she loved it, but I was shaken. My older brother told me the same thing once.
I thought that I left just enough wiggle room for the readers imagination to run with it.
So when does description become too much? Can there really ever be too much description in a story? I'm so confused.
Help?
~Danie
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