Ok, so in my new story, the protagonist is playing for the bad-guys.
Meanwhile, the are a bunch of 'good guys' who have been sent to deal with the trouble she is helping to cause.
One of them is very righteous and quickly begins to hate our protagonist for being evil and corrupt. Since that's a very big part of his personality, I can't just get rid of it, but I really want to show readers, maybe before he meets our protagonist, that he's a good guy even if he's so angry.
Besides his burning hate for evil, I'm not settled on his personality. He could be arrogant, humble, etc. For now, I'd just love some suggestions of ways of showing his good side before his bad side is revealed.
Does anyone have any suggestions?
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