For those of you who are up to date with my story Kiss My Tears Goodnight (once known as Double Dad), you'd know that Corrie is hitching to Adelaide. I have 3 options of where she sould go once she get there, and I need a second and third and fourth etc opinion!
Kitty, since it makes sense that she should go to her best friend's place. We love best friends!
Ubi caritas est vera, Deus ibi est.
"The mark of your ignorance is the depth of your belief in injustice and tragedy. What the caterpillar calls the end of the world, the Master calls the butterfly." ~ Richard Bach
Hmm, even though I'm not very familiar with the story, I thin that an abandoned house is the most...exciting option. It'd be a good one to pick if your critiquers say you need conflct, or a good hook, or something like that.
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It's a toss up between her mum's deserted house and Kitty's, for me. I haven't read your stories, but both would work, probably. Just think of the place the most fun stuff could happen to her (by fun I do not actually mean she will have fun, I mean you will have fun).
If you haven't really decided whether she has a boyfriend or not, then I wouldn't give her one just so she could rush to his house.
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It'd be a good one to pick if your critiquers say you need conflct, or a good hook, or something like that.
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