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My Last Sunrise



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Mon Apr 10, 2006 9:11 am
Doubt says...



I'd like to, if I may, direct you to a website of mine. It houses my series of poetry called The Searching Series that I'd like you to read and even maybe enjoy.

http://www.freewebs.com/mylastsunrise

Tell me what you think about it. Feel free to sign the guestbook too.

Thanks,
Dan
Cuz I'm praying for rain and I'm praying for tidal waves.
I wanna see the ground give way. I wanna watch it all go down.
  





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Mon Apr 10, 2006 9:30 am
Elizabeth says...



I read a few just now,
Doubt, those are beautiful...
*steals your talent*

I was blocked from the guestbook however *parents* but yeah... nice job :)
  





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Thu Apr 13, 2006 6:26 pm
Araidne says...



Nice graphics. I like what you have written. :D
Out flew the web, and floated wide,
The mirror cracked from side to side.
'The curse has come upon me' cried
The Lady of Shalott
  





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Mon May 01, 2006 7:17 am
Doubt says...



Thankyou, thankyou.

Anyone else?
Cuz I'm praying for rain and I'm praying for tidal waves.
I wanna see the ground give way. I wanna watch it all go down.
  





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Mon Jul 24, 2006 7:09 pm
Chevy says...



I believe this would make a great book.
when there's nowhere to go, it's time to grow up.
  





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Wed Oct 11, 2006 2:57 am
VampX13 says...



Very nice. For some reason it makes me think of a sort of Modern French style.

(Hmm... that is very curious...)

Very nice.
"I'm an actress, not a beauty." -from the movie, Stage Beauty
  





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Mon Dec 04, 2006 8:26 pm
ibelieve_inme says...



Brilliant! I love it all....I cant wait for the next part, it sucks me in just like a storybook. I think you should seriously consider getting this published when its all said and done -
I scream a scream no man would care to hear
I feel a feeling somewhat familiar yet amplified
And I’m enjoying it

It makes me think....I like that. Sometime, I'll get you my address to my website, and we can switch opinions. Keep up the writing, it's all worth it.
I open my mouth to sing, and you can see right through me.
I open my eyes to see, And I’m invisible
I look around me to take in my surroundings
And I disappear - And then the words begin...
  








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