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Yeah, this is the version of rEal eMotion sung by Jade, kinda like how TBR posted the Jade version of 1000 Words... I had to do this!

rEal eMotion
By: Jade

What can i do for you

What can i do for you
What can i do for you
What can i do for you
I can hear you

What can i do for you
What can i do for you
What can i do for you

Far beneath the hazy borders of my heart
I can see a place
It's something like this
Every now and then I don't know what to do
Still I know that I
Can never go back

All the things I've seen
In those hazy dreams
Can't compare to what I see tonight
Everything's so different
That it brings me to my knees

And oh, I know, the world of Real Emotion
Has surrounded me
I wont give into it
Now I know, that world
It is the only way my heart can go
I hear your voice calling out to me
You'll never be alone

What can I do for you
What can I do for you
What can I do for you
I can hear you

What can I do for you
What can I do for you
What can I do for you

I don't plan on looking back on my own life
I don't ever plan
To feel I own you
Even if by chance everything should go wrong
You come in one day
And try to save me

If from time to time
It's an upward climb
All I know is that I must believe
Cause the truth I'm seeking
Always was inside of me

And when, I find, the world of Real Emotion
Has surrounded me
The many things that you
Taught me then
Will always be enough to get me through the pain
Because of you I am strong enough
To know I'm not alone

What can I do for you
What can I do for you

What can I do for you
What can I do for you
What can I do for you
What can I do for you

I can hear you

And if, I find, the real without the motion
Has surrounded me
And I can't go on
And you are there
The moment that I close my eyes
You comfort me
We are connected
For all of time
I'll never be alone

And oh, I know, the world of Real Emotion
Has surrounded me
I won't give into it
Now I know, that world
It is the only way my heart can go
I hear your voice calling out to me
You'll never be alone

What can I do for you
What can I do for you
What can I do for you
I can hear you

What can I do for you
What can I do for you
What can I do for you
I can hear you

I can hear you


HEY HEY HEY I LIKE TO SAY HEY!!! (That kinda rhymed... )

Not bad, but it kind of rambled a bit.

YOu really used what can i do for you too much. Maybe change that up a bit, but it was good all around i though!

If this is not your work, then please do not put it in literary forums. ><

And it's supposed to be "falling in" not "far beneath."

*moved to Poetry Discussion*