I like the reviews that talk about what the writing needs to improve. Or what the person likes about tit. they didn't come here to have you yell at them about grammar, that's what schools for. and besides, when/if they publish it then they can worry about the grammar.
You'd better wise up, Pony... you get tough like me and you don't get hurt. You look out for yourself and nothing can touch you, man. — Dallas Winston, The Outsiders
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