I like the reviews that talk about what the writing needs to improve. Or what the person likes about tit. they didn't come here to have you yell at them about grammar, that's what schools for. and besides, when/if they publish it then they can worry about the grammar.
"Now I realize that there is no righteous path, it’s just people trying to do their best in a world where it is far too easy to do your worst." — Castiel
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