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Jane Shaffer Essay- Need Help



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Sun Jan 15, 2006 11:58 pm
Just Imagine says...



I never did Jane Shaffer. I always had teachers in East who taught me nothing of Jane Shaffer. Well, I found it easy to write a Jane Shaffer on people and their interactions and stuff... But the problem is, I can't write commentaries.

To give an example:
Topic Sentence: She shot her
CD: There's evidence of her finger prints on the gun.
CM: ??
Can you just give two CM for this paragraph?
Courage may blossom in quiet hearts,
For who can tell where bravery starts?
For truth is a song, oft lying unsung
  








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