There are other threads where you can ask for assistance with work. If you would like this to remain here, I'd ask that you edit the post so that it meets the guidelines. As it stands, the topic has several key words that need to be either defined or unpacked in the initial post, or any discussion would quickly get tangled up.
So you're going to kill a god. Sure. But what happens next?
Surround yourself with people who are serious about being writers, and who will tell you, ‘Hey—you can do better than this.’ Who will be critical of your work, but also supportive. And who will not be competitive in a negative way. — Isabel Quintero
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