Okay so I'm writing a fantasy novel, except I don't know what to put in the beginning so can anyone help me? Here's my idea for a starting chapter:
It was 2 minutes to midnight and Reeve was still wide awake, not only because of the intense August heat, but also of what he would find out the next day: His 13th birthday. 7 years ago, Rose, the owner of the White Horse Orphanage and Reeve’s caretaker or as the children call her, ‘Mother Kindness’ promised Reeve that she would tell him how he ended up in an orphanage when he becomes a teenager.
Reeve raised his left arm to reveal a digital watch with the glowing numbers: 11:58:52, just 1 minute left… 40 seconds… 20… 5, 4, 3, 2… But Reeve never saw it turn 12:00, because the next moment, he was lying facedown on what felt like grass.
Okay, so can anyone give some suggestions or comments? Thanks a lot
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