At the moment I'm writing a book (just passed the 50,000 word mark with five chapters to go), and I've got into a habit of making observations at the beginning of every other (or thereabouts) chapter. I always make them relevant to the story, obviously, but I was just wondering if you think this is a good idea. I personally like it, but I think that some people may not. I've posted an excerpt below so you can see what I'm on about!
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