Then I did some looking around for other poetry techniques that might enhance this poem. I found @barefootrunner had this lovely topic Kiss My Assonance - 5 ways to improve your poetry which has a lot of wonderful techniques.
But now I can't figure out how to incorporate them into an existing poem. I think I could write a poem using alliteration and assonance quite easily. But putting them into a poem that was already written is a bit harder because I have to mess around with wording.
So I'm wondering if you have any tips on how to incorporate some of the things in her guide into an existing poem?
And possibly if you want to get more specific you could help me pick out which one to try to put into this poem and how to do so.
Here's the poem
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