Questions:Well, 'Serjeant' is an older spelling of Sergeant, so I think I remember you mentioning you're from the UK? Have you ever seen that type of spelling of the word? I haven't decided, but depending on how many complaints ( ), I might change it to the modern version.Serjeant. Was that intentionally misspelled? And can you describe blood being stale?
Yes, I'm from the UK. I've never seen that spelling but usually when it appears mispelled its because of the way a character says his/her words.
He was clothed but his pride had to have been stripped, the way his uniform was stripped from him."
I’m very sorry if I took this the wrong way but was the man missing his private part, because I’ve read it has happened in a few battles, I mean it’s unavoidable. Otherwise I don’t think his ‘pride’ was clearly labelled.
Heh, that actually never occurred to me but yes, I'm sure all types of limbs were taken clean off by some unstoppable force.
Now, when you mean 'pride' isn't completely labeled, do you mean details are lacking? If so, I'll use Samuel's curiosity for me, and expand. For reference though, that is if you're curious, in any regiment if a soldier is stripped (taken away) of their uniform (basically their identity) is an insult to that soldier and it could probably be embarrassing in some sense. A uniform to a soldier symbolizes, 'you're a team player and apart of that team,' so for that identity (uniform) to be taken, it's an embarrassment, an insult, and shows that soldier has no place or rank anymore.
Hmm... I guess I will have to further on that sentence, after explaining, LOL!
Right... I see now. I only thought it 'cos it said his pride was to be stripped like his uniform.
After decades, I still remember the Serjeant's words. 'In which the criminal act, that hallow be our brother, has committed, he shall receive one mercy under God, and not endure the penalty of gaping into his own defiance, such as death.' My commanding officer was a fair but strict gentleman.
Did you follow what was happening in this paragraph?
That's a form of corpal(sp?) punishment right? Or some other way to punish..?
She is, Just wait until Chapter four! Then you'll have free roam and able to decide if she's still proud... or just bold. The apples don't fall too far from the tree...Martha's a proud mum.
Ah, then I'll have to hurry along to that part.
Thank you but I think I'm going to have to substitute another word for 'Patriot.' Which is my fault but the word has or had a very pronounced meaning, and wasn't mentioned until 1775, I think. So, whoops to me!‘Rest my little Patriot’, that was a nice touch.
Ugh. I hate it when that happens. I usually have to consult a dictionary to find if certain words were used in the time of my own HF works.
Nah, I meant to type per say but I actually like prevent better. Thanks!. pre say ... Was that meant to be prevent?
You're welcome.
If Welcome does, he has skills I'm unaware of! *chuckles*
When I finished, I waited for his reaction. Father at first, didn't reply. He sat in his chair, staring wide-eyed into thin air. After a few seconds, I wondered if he fallen asleep with his eyes open, so I waved a hand in front of his face to snap his attention. It worked; snatching my wrist tightly, he pulled me into his face.
I wondered if he had fallen asleep...
No, silly Fishr. The word 'had' was missing in your sentence so I added it in my suggestion. XD
Now I’m really curious, like Samuel, to know more about Welcome’s father.
In ways I can related to Samuel’s excitement and his interest in family history. I had no idea on my own until my mum told me a bit about her ancestors and I remember asking questions and pestering her until she said she wouldn’t tell me. So that’s an excellent supplement.
It's interesting you say that because the way the character of Samuel is portrayed, he's 90-95% like me, so everything you read (apart from the history prospective) I did or went through in some form or another. Currently, I'm pestering my second uncle about my great, great grandfather who served in the Civil War. My uncle is being a little mieser, and telling me bits and pieces which is becoming frustrating. Sound familiar? And thank you for the compliment. At least I'm doing something right, lol.
90-95 percent? Well.. It seems we are quite alike in some ways too.
As for Welcome's father, another uncle of mine said the same thing that you mentioned, Myth. His exact words, "Man, when do I get to know?"
I hope to find out soon then!
:D Too funny. I'm glad you're enjoying yourself and latched onto Sammy, so it seems. That's a good feeling, and like I mentioned, at least I'm doing something right.
I'm a little embarrassed. I can't help getting attached to main characters and Samuel is a real peach. I'm a sucker, I know. XD
Have a good one, Myth! By the way, I did read, The Hanging, and it was written very well. The story reminded me of the Puritans and the Salem Witch Trials.
Wow! I had tried to make it a sort of simplistic 'Dickens' type of story. I'm glad it was liked.
Now I'd better get onto the next part and notice all the tiny things that pester to be editted.
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