thank you I know people are probably talking behind my back about my lack of ANY edit, but hey I'm a busy (and procrastinating) person. EVENTUALLY, this will be edited, trust me. Just as soon as Nano is over, I'm going into editing mode. Not to say this will get edited, but hey, its something!
“It's necessary to have wished for death in order to know how good it is to live.” ― Alexandre Dumas, The Count of Monte Cristo
This was very different then the other pieces I read of your and still of course I love it. It had that long story feel at first but then after a while at the end it was okay to actually end. I wasn't begging for more because I knew it was really over and yet I felt much satisfaction. This was brilliantly done. GREAT JOB CLAU! Applause for you!
-Rieda
I love, love.
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