Something that I'm working on for English class, it can be any type of creative writing so I thought I'd maybe try a prologue/first chapter. Any help is very welcome/ any ideas. Thank you!
Freedom is never more than one generation away from extinction. We didn't pass it to our children in the bloodstream. It must be fought for, protected, and handed on for them to do the same.
Ronald Reagan.
I cannot fathom how long I’ve been here.
Days?
Months?
Years?
Or just a few seconds?
Time is irrelevant. Reality means nothing. Pain is everything.
I drown in it, scramble frantically to the surface only to find there isn't one. It consumes me, and I can't fight it. The power of it crushes me, quenches my heart, tears at my muscles, blazes through my head like the inferno that led me to this undeniable torment. It claws at my soul, my very being. The drugs they have pumped into my system keep me sedated and every time I try to escape their clutches I am pulled back down further, as if an invisible force is grabbing at my ankles, driving me to madness like an off-course roller-coaster.
My brother comes to me sometimes, mostly when I'm not expecting it. He does not speak, but gestures, reaches out a hand “come with me.” His eyes, so like my own are full of longing and sadness, his lips, the exact same shape as mine, smile at me, willing me to place my hand in his. To take me away, to pull me out of this reality, to rid me of the needles and the nurses and the doctors. How I wish I could. But my hands are like dead weights beside me, refusing to lift even a centimetre. I cannot go with him. That would be defeat. And my purpose is to fight.
Those who caused this - the so-called "Higher State" or "Government" - they are the ones who should be feeling this agony. Not us, we are the innocent. We are the good fighting the evil.
I am broken, trapped here, in a hospital bed. Dead inside. Father comes during visiting hours and I hear him tell me that the resistance is slowly being put down. I must join them. They need my help. But Jones says I am not allowed to move. She tells me how lucky I am. The bomb didn't kill me. They are able to sew me back together, remove the burns, bandage the cuts, mend the broken bones. Lucky? I am not lucky.
Eventually I accept who I am. A lost girl with no freedom. With no wings. And no brother. Not just a brother. Twin brother. I am half a person. My other half taken away from me in the blink of an eye. I am a war survivor, hidden from the world, from the fight. The others think of me as dead. And yet they continue the battle, never giving up. Freedom will be theirs, even if death is the price put on their heads.
But what they do not know is this. The Higher State may have taken away my liberty, my faith and my family, they have not taken away my fight. I will mend my broken heart, I will grieve and then I will look forward. I will step down from this hospital bed and I will prepare. Memories of my brother set alight, burning like a human torch will keep my sights clear. Revenge will be sweet.
The enemy may think of me as dead. Death will come for them.
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