This is just a little story I started yesterday. It's going to be a type of "fairytale with a twist". The majourity of the story will take place when Jade is 18 years old. Tell me what you think about it so far!
Once upon a time, in the magical land of Iraelle, there was a princess. Her name was Princess Jade Muzimee. She was exceedingly beautiful. From the moment she was born she was proclaimed the most angelic child in the land. She had long golden locks of stunning blonde hair. Her gorgeous cheekbones outlined her big, round, dazzling blue eyes. To top it all off, she had a bewitching smile. Her parents spoiled her rotten but by the time she was three, they noticed she was quite a tomboy.
"Jade, come play with your dollies!" Queen Muzime said to her beautiful daughter.
Jade shook her head.
"Please? I want you to play with me." Her mother replied solemnly.
"No. I want to play with other toys." Jade commanded.
"Alright then sweetie." The Queen spoke with a tiny hint of nervousness.
The Queen had always wanted a little princess to pamper... but her daughter was not girly. Not one bit. The King and Queen were very nervous that Jade would never get married off properly. Princesses were supposed to be girly and elegant. They could never get Jade away from the toy weapons she made. Jade was particularly fond of a sling shot she built herself out of sticks and rope. Jade refused to wear skirts. And when they made her wear them, she threw enormous temper tantrums. By the time she was 7 years old, both of Jade's parents were extremely worried. Jade would often run away into the woods and pretend she was a knight in shining armor preparing for battle. Her parents would try to stop her, but Jade always found a way to sneak out. Jade had one friend, Derek, and she would always play with him.
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