Maybe I'll adapt this to become the prologue of a longer story (if I find the time/energy to start yet another long story ) but for now it's just a short story.
Feel free to rip it to shreds ^^
XxxDo
“I can’t believe we’re finally going. I remember spending hours on the phone with you while we tried to get our parents to agree to this, and now the moment is actually here. It’s so unreal.” Aiden smiled, shifting the position of the shoulder strap of her bag in an attempt to make the weight more bearable. Bringing a laptop with her on holiday was absolutely awesome if you planned to watch movies or have access to the internet, but getting it there was a different story entirely. She wasn’t planning on loosing her computer to some luggage mess-up by checking it in, and was therefore carrying the 3.6 kilogram chunk of electronics across three airports and two plane flights. And then back.
“God, I know. This morning, when I woke up, I nearly had a heart attack of excitement.” Dylan’s tan face was split into a joyous grin, which seemed permanently plastered on her fair face, her blue eyes shining with sincere enthusiasm. After hours on top of hours of pleading, their parents had allowed the two best friends to go on their first solo-holiday. The teens arguments had been reasonable, as they were sixteen, amply responsible, and both trusted by their parents not to get involved in any uncanny activities. Plus, it’d only be for a week, and they were staying at the holiday house in Spain that Aiden’s parents owned. In other words; nothing could go wrong.
They’d cleared the first passport check, waving goodbye to their parents from behind the glass barrier that divided those who left and those who stayed. Now, they were on their own, and all too ready to make the most of every minute of freedom.
“You wanna get a coffee? We have ages before the gate is announced, even.” Aiden tucked her short, blonde hair behind her ear to keep the loose strands from tickling her skin, and eyed the overhead boards. Searching for a restaurant or café, she stood still, scanning their surroundings.
“There, dude.” Dylan gestured at a brightly lit sign that hung over a counter, the white letters announcing: The Coffee House. She started towards it, grabbing Aiden by the wrist as she took off. Nearly dragging her friend along, she grinned. “Come on, A, I’m seriously in need of a caffeine fix.”
“Same here.” Aiden said, tightly gripping the shoulder strap of her bag with her free hand to keep it from slipping off as they quickened their pace. “I can’t understand how my parents could possibly find me old enough to go on holiday alone if they don’t even allow me to have a cup of coffee in the morning. Honestly, it lacks all logic.”
“You can’t seriously expect parents to be logical, dude, they’re not meant to make any sense.”
“True.” Aiden rested her arms on the counter as Dylan released her wrist, pleased with their luck. There wasn’t a line to be spoken of, with only one customer waiting for his drink. The African-American woman behind the counter granted them a kind smile, and they returned it before glancing at the chalkboard behind her.
“They’ve got Lattes.” Aiden announced, content, as though this wasn’t a given fact.
“You ever seen a coffee shop that didn’t have Lattes? It’s damn near mandatory, if you ask me.” Dylan nudged her gently, amused.
Aiden sniggered. Her friend was truly in the mood to be witty this morning, with one-liners rolling off her tongue like bolts of lightning. She could always count on her friend to amuse her, though school time and holidays, no matter how they communicated. Dylan usually managed to make her emails sound more like stand-up comedy than the stand-up comedy fellows managed to do to their onstage speeches.
“Two latte’s, please.” Dylan ordered with a charming smile, and the woman behind the counter beamed back before starting the coffee machine. Aiden narrowed her eyes, watching three ominous-looking men approach. She couldn’t quite decipher why they raised the hairs on her arms like soldiers for salute; though there was something terrorizing about the resolute pace with which they advanced towards the cafe.
The middle one, the tallest and more fierce-looking one of the three, pocketed his hand, his eyes meeting hers. The cold cruelty that radiated from him caused her to involuntarily stiffen up as he held her gaze. Then he retracted his hand, a gun firmly fitted into his palm. Tearing his gaze loose from her, aiming at the Cafe, he fired, again and again in close succession.
People screamed. People ran. People fled.
And people hit the ground.
The hostess took a hit to the chest, the latte she’d just made falling from her hand, and limply vanished out of their line of sight behind the high counter. A suit-clad businessman rose to his feet, quickly reaching for his metal case, when bullets knocked him off balance. As he clutched his hands to his chest he toppled over, taking down a table as he fell. Coffee spilled across the floor, the mug crashing and breaking, a gruesome mix of brown and red liquid forming a puddle around him as he gasped.
The shooter sprinted at him, gunning down a woman as he passed by her. She had already been cowering on the floor. She screamed, then breathed one last wheezing breath before she fell still, blood running down the side of her face from the bullet hole in her temple. Her empty eyes were fixed on Dylan and Aiden, seemingly begging them to run. Though during the seconds it took for the scene to unfold, neither Aiden nor Dylan had moved a muscle.
“Oh, shit.” Dylan whispered, her eyes wide. Staring in awe at the three men she backed away, circling Aiden’s wrist with her hand almost exactly as she had only minutes ago. This time, though, it wasn’t out of enthusiasm that she tugged at her friend’s arm.
“Oh my God…” Aiden was shaking, her gaze fixed on the shooter. He kneeled beside the businessman, pressing the nozzle of his gun against the man’s forehead. Apparently having the man be half-dead didn’t suffice. His lips trembled as he tried to speak, but not a word came out. Is he the target of their shootout? What the hell is going on?
“Behind the counter. Come on.” Dylan said through clenched teeth, trying to control the quivering of her voice. As slowly as their adrenaline-filled muscles allowed, the two friends walked backwards, rounding the counter. No more than two feet from their goal, an angry yell stopped them in their tracks. The two hollered words had been clear enough. Don't move!
Stepping in front of her friend, Dylan backs into her as the shooter draws nearer, his eyes irrevocably fixed on her face. He takes another step, his arm lifting. The nozzle aimed at Dylan’s chest he cracks a sly smile. With a wink, he squeezes off a round. It all happened too fast for either one of them to grasp the severity of their situation.
The impact of the bullet throws her into Aiden, bringing both teenagers to the ground with the gunshot echoing around them. Motionless, winded, and with her eyes tightly closed, Aiden lets herself go limp. A stinging pain in her shoulder tells her that the bullet is lodged in her flesh. She keeps herself from screaming, the torn skin burning fiercely, as it dawns on her that there had only been one shot. Despite this, Dylan’s hand, which is still around her wrist, lacks all strength.
Aiden had always thought it a television myth that bullets could successfully rip right through a person’s torso and lodge in the person behind them. She was hit. Dylan's hand was still. There had only been one shot… It couldn't possibly have...
Or could it?
Her shoulder throbs, and the hand around her wrist remains eerily limp. The shooter’s footsteps reverberate in her ears as he walks away, and another shot rips through the deadly tension. The businessman? Did they kill him?
Muffled conversation, followed by the sound of metal sliding against metal, force her to fake unconsciousness a little longer, but soon she hears the gunman pace away; his henchmen falling into step with him. In the distance, someone screams. Strained breathing comes from behind the counter. The hostess? Did she survive?
Turning her head, slowly, she feel tears slide down her cheeks, fearing the worst. She rests her gaze on Dylan’s pale face, holding her breath. Her vision blurred by the liquid that overflows the brim of her eyes, she finds that Dylan’s is staring back at her, and for a split second she swears she saw movement. A split second is all it takes for reality to sink in.
Dylan's eyes are open, yes.
But they're open, stock-still, and lifeless.
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