Young Writers Society

*whistles in admiration*
I have a feeling this is an older post, but it wass really good just the same. The battle strategy was excellent; it wasn't just ripped from some other author's mind. It was original. I appreciate those kinds of stories. Anyway, I think you could've added some description, although the first description of the warrior was excellent. I would love to read more, and if you could incorporate it into a book, that would be awesome.


Vet

Awesomely written. great and captivating first sentence, some backstabbing/i meant trickery in the end... all of my nitpicks were already taken... Good work!