Hey there Everybody! I had an idea and i had to run with it for a while, tell me what you think of this start!
Her body lay broken and bleeding on the sandy foothills; crumbled in a lifeless heap. Each limb askew, as if she can’t quite make up her mind which direction to point a stranger in. Even if some chosen person happened to walk by, he wouldn’t be able to make out her face or who she’d been. As if with a hammer, her face had been bludgeoned, and beaten to a fleshy mold. Her hair was layered with blond highlights to clash against the dark brown and it fanned out in the sand. The curious thing was that she had no shoes on, her pedicured feet bare. Only the glowing eyes of fox lurking in the shadows knew what really happened, and of course his lips were forever sealed.
What happened to this poor woman? What secret was worth this much damage? These were the thoughts of a young boy with binoculars in his hands as he peered into the eerie dessert behind the place he called home. Only, at the time, he had no idea it was his mother with the bludgeoned face.
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