First entry, supposed to be the beginning to a short story. The idea is that it's a speech that somebody is remembering being told, hence why it's in second person. I know it's not perfect, very short and needs work, but i thought I'd go ahead and post it.
You need to stop sometimes, think, take a second. Those patronizing voices echoing selfishly inside your head- they're not real, you've made them up. Stop punishing yourself for a sin you haven't committed. Eventually the guilt will seep through every inch of your body; every muscle, every vein, every cell. You'll do it without thinking. You'll let go of the rope, pull the trigger or take the jump, and once it's done there's no way back.
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