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I stare at it for a moment, then lift my gaze to what once was a neat stack of money. It has since been transformed to a downright pandemonium of bills, which lie scattered across the rough floorboards of the porch.
I shake my head, clearing it from the countless useless comparisons that I collect whilst I go about my daily business.
filled to the brim with compassion.
“Daniel, put her down,” I say, my tone friendly and coercing.
I have faith that one day he’ll become that man again, and that with enough effort his troubles can turn into an issue of the past. It has to be possible.
He faces me, pained, his hands, the nails black-rimmed, clawing at his stained shirt nervously.
Closing my eyes, I feel warm tears trace a path down my cheeks, and hope that this time he truly is sincere, and that his words are not merely a figment of a drunken mind.
“I requested that he leave.” Webb adds
“Put her down, Daniel. Now,” my tone is severe as I take a step towards them.
I've often considered whether I'm somewhat ADD.
it came out sounding like a question more than a statement
he rubs the bridge of his nose, appearing rather confused with his own memory.
.I don't blame him; anyone would be confused after the amounts he appears to have downed today
My words were a bullet to the heart.
Going home?” [s]S[/s]she asks, looking at the two of us with youthful optimism.
“Yes, Baby, we’re going home. All of us[s].[/s],” I say, as a smile breaks through on Daniels face.
“I love you.” He tells me, taking a steady step forwards - in more ways than one.
I love you.” He whispers again
My stress does not contribute to the well-being of my house, I can tell you that in all seriousness. I am capable of single-handedly knocking quite some economic value off the property.
I know, rationally,
Parents don't necessarily base all their judgment on reason. We're not above human flaws.
As everyone knows; what goes up, must come down.
Sensing some pent-up frustration? You're very much correct.
I acknowledge that keeping him away from his own daughter may have been a mistake on my part; but the initial fault lies with him.
The tension seems to dissapate slowly from her features, smoothening them out, allowing her to once again look her own age - as opposed to some seven years her own senior. Smiling back, her eyes lose their austerity. “In the playroom.”
Daniel would never intentionally hurt her, but it's a commonly known fact that alcohol has the nasty tendency to lower one’s opinions as to what is acceptable behaviour. Driving under the influence may suddenly appear to be a dandy idea, for one. On the contrary, it can be deadly.
I stride into the naturally lit room - the walls lined by tall windows - where Alicia and her peers spend most of their leisure hours. Half a dozen pairs of curious eyes whisk my way, lingering for a mere moment before their attention is claimed by a more fascinating feat. Parents aren't an unordinary sight around here. One pair remains; bright blue crystals shining with joy. Her face splits into a wide smile, her rosy cheeks glowing with bliss.
“I love you.” He tells me, taking a steady step forwards - in more ways than one.
I slam the car door[s], pressing my thumb against the electronic lock button on my keychain as I pace towards her. [/s]Approaching, I can see that the lines around her unusually stern grey eyes have deepened with concern, etched into her skin like canyons. [s]Her mouth is set in a straight line, her lips tightly pressed together; a straight channel drawn across the unruly network of ravines. [/s]
[s]I shake my head, clearing it from the countless useless comparisons that I collect whilst I go about my daily business. All kidding aside - [/s]I fully understand the apprehension that radiates off her, for she is the adult in charge of Alicia’s welfare during my daughters half-day stays at the preschool. This responsibility should not be as strenuous a burden as it has become over the past seven months. Ever since Daniel found himself going for the bottom of several bottles at a time, alcohol clawing its way into our lives at an unnerving pace, she has had an increasingly complex task to cope with.
Really, it all happened too fast for any of us to grasp it, until it was already beyond our control. It’s been almost a year – three months of which were spent with us living like a somewhat normal family. Those three months of tending to him as though he was a child were nerve-wrecking, and out of self-preservation I drew the line, walked his drunk ass to the car and brought him to a rehab center. [add something like 'he got out' here.]
[s]Sensing some pent-up frustration? You're very much correct.
Unfortunately, it wasn’t impossible to walk out of there – and so he did, a week into his treatment. Since that day, when I received that dreadful "M'am, I'm afraid your husband has left the premises, along with another member of our AA rehab group," phone call, it has all been going in a downward spiral.[/s] That was when the kidnapping threats started.
[s]I acknowledge that keeping him away from his own daughter may have been a mistake on my part; but the initial fault lies with him.
My bewildered state doesn’t do much to enhance the teacher's sense of comfort, for the abrasions on my arms standing out sharply against my pale skin, the untreated scrape that lines my jaw equally as visible. To her, they probably appear to be the result of domestic violence, for the leap from a father who drinks himself halfway to a coma and then attempts to kidnap his own child, to a husband who knocks his spouse around when he gets down some isn’t unimaginable.
On this account, almost everyone is mistaken; they judge the situation too eagerly. Daniel is many things – a liar, a thief, an alcoholic, and a desperately lost man – but he isn’t, and will never be, a man who beats his wife or child. [/s]
“Mrs. Thomas…” Webb reaches out, resting her hand on my shoulder in a gesture that is filled to the brim with compassion. I [s]glance at her, then [/s]brush past. Pushing open the glass doors that lead into the lightwood foyer of the preschool, I walk in with as much dignity in my composure as I can muster. She [s]gently presses her thick-rimmed glasses higher up on her nose, then [/s]follows in my wake without a word.
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