Young Writers Society

Hello fellow writer. I know why this is a featured work... it's beautiful. This story has a bowl full of emotion. It's captivative and thoroughly detailed. I feel in love with it. The story is sad, no doubt, but it is also inspirational. I would love to read more from you. PM me anytime if you have anything you would like me to review and read.

Keep Writing!

Nike

Amazing ! and yes I know i'm under the age limit ! ! I found it really really good , It kept me hooked on through out but I lost my understanding at the last paragraph . Other wise I found it amazing ! There's really nothing left for me to say ! really good once again !











An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind - Mahatma Gandhi (Gandhi Ji)

wow, this is really nice. I love it, it's very inspirational. I like how deep this is written, your style is different than what I have read. Which is very nice, I like reading different styles. If you post more work, please give me a shout out. I would love to read them all and comment! Your work is very nice, thanks for your time.
~Randi (Alabaster)

holy cow! This is beautiful! There isn't really much that I can say, but the simplistic beauty of it, the way its formatted, the descriptions ... it's all wonderful! You put it not-too-blatantly, allowing the mind to wander and make its own assumptions!

Keep writing! I'd love to read more!

I have to thank you all for your wonderful reviews. Normally, I'd reply to each of you individually, but it's already been a while and will still be a while before I'd have the time. I'm sorry that this took so long in the first place.

Once again, thanks for everything. I'm extremely grateful.