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oh. okay. gotcha. sorry. 8)
"I myself am composed entirely of flaws, stitched together with good intentions."- Augusten Burroughs




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okay, heres something noone has mentioned: ZEE TITLE!!!

I was just browsing some old YWS fiction and I saw another story called revenge. a friend 'o' mine recently wrote one with the same title as well. an original story such as this one calls for a unique title. perhaps you could brainstorm a few. titles are such a bother. i suck most heinously at them. but see what you can come up with, eh?
"I myself am composed entirely of flaws, stitched together with good intentions."- Augusten Burroughs



It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
— JRR Tolkien