Beneath the Hero [OOC]

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Ok, I have changed it. The memory power I chose was going to play into his character, but I think this could do the same. Besides, illusory magic is great for cover ups...




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Yes! I love illusions! That is awesome! You can get a first post up if you like. @JamesPeterson
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Sweet! Thanks. I will post here in maybe an hour or so when I can use my PC.




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Hi. I'm Hazel Williams, and I wanted to join if you have any more slots. the story looks cool. Here is my character.
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Name: Rose

Age: 14

Appearance: crimson red hair

Role: Hero

Magic: Rose can bond up to two weapons at a time. What this means is she can throw the weapons and warp to their location. (May or may not work with bullets/arrows, up to you.)

Personality: Fiery personality. Sarcasm and insults are like compliments from her.

Other:

:D I will join if I can
Zelius Arduis




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Is it alright if I do a bit of worldbuilding of my own? Adding on to your premise a bit, but giving the world some more life.




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@JamesPeterson sure! Just run anything huge by me before posting, kay?

you can join! @Hazel Williams
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kk, nothing huge yet I think.
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@yoshikrab
I sent my first post, tell me if there is anything wrong with it. :D




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@JamesPeterson could you change the contents of the letter to add the fact that Tev needs to get under the first "O" in the Hollywood sign.

Other than that, it's a great post!
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@yoshikrab
I would like to make this for the world

Outlanders:
After the apocalypse, cities could only handle so much, so they rejected those they didn't like. These became known as the Outlanders (may be changed to Exiles).
The Outlanders manage to survive in the harsh wasteland of the post-apocalyptic world.
The cities have very strict defenses, so they can't just get in, or sneak in.
I'm also thinking there could be a few main cities in the world. Basically the last refuges of mankind after the apocalypse.
Los Angeles would obviously be one.
The others could be up to you.
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Hmmm we could try to incorporate something similar in the story, but this is supposed to be more like a near-future rp, so not TOO crazy if you know what I mean. But the exiled people is a pretty good idea. I'm just a little unsure about an apocolypse
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@yoshikrab
I thought it was a post apocalyptic world, though? Maybe I read it wrong....




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Ok, it says near apocalyptic, sorry. :)




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@JamesPeterson It's ok! There's nothing wrong with misinterpreting stuff. I do it all the time!
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