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when life gives you lemons . . . i don't know . . . i don't like lemons

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yosh
May 30, 2023
LuxLuthor, FireEyes, momonster, Mageheart, winterwolf0100, soundofmind, tatteredbones, Dossereana, Spearmint

hi yws

momonster hi how you doin
May 30, 2023

yosh good what about you
May 30, 2023

momonster am good
May 30, 2023

Spearmint hiiiii! :]
23 hours ago

IcyFlame hellooooo
22 hours ago

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yosh
May 8, 2023
FireEyes, winterwolf0100, LuxLuthor, Horisun, Mageheart, Dossereana, EternalRain, BluesClues, Hijinks, Spearmint, tatteredbones, looseleaf

rain just got crazy outside

time to write!
yosh
May 3, 2023
Quillfeather, LuxLuthor, FireEyes, LadySpark, Dossereana, Mageheart, winterwolf0100, BluesClues, tatteredbones, Plume, Spearmint

you know that feeling when you're listening to a song(/piece !!!) and you just listen to it over and over again and it gets better each time
yosh
May 1, 2023
Hijinks, Dossereana, Plume, winterwolf0100, BluesClues, tatteredbones, Spearmint, Mageheart

asoifhwoiafhoawihfaoiwf i posted my april madness poem

uhhhhh its kind of a mess

but good luck to my future reviewers lol

battlefield
yosh
May 1, 2023
Hijinks, Dossereana, winterwolf0100, Que, BluesClues, tatteredbones, Spearmint

google en writesant

holy yws

new short story just dropped

Phantom Pianist
yosh
Apr 29, 2023
momonster, alliyah, EsmerayaRose, winterwolf0100, Spearmint, Mageheart, tatteredbones, figmoon, FireEyes, Que, Dossereana, Horisun, yosh, DreamyAlice

ik were still in april but i cant WAIT for napo lollll

methinks ill need that kind of motivation to keep writing ;-;

Quillfeather Only 368 days until the next napo
Apr 29, 2023

yosh WAIT i meant NANO lol
Apr 29, 2023
yosh
Apr 26, 2023
FireEyes, soundofmind, tatteredbones, Hijinks, Dossereana, Mageheart, Que, GengarIsBestBoy, BluesClues, winterwolf0100, figmoon, Spearmint, Arcticus

you ever just wonder why

soundofmind yeah
Apr 26, 2023
yosh
Apr 17, 2023
Dossereana, LuxLuthor, winterwolf0100, looseleaf, Mageheart

So. Shinkai at it again huh.

I just watched Suzume and it was . . . amazing . . . ?

You might notice I put a question mark there, because honestly, I had mixed feelings, but don't mind me im just gonna rant about suzume here for a bit.

Spoiler! :

Lots of people said that the animation was subpar, but honestly, I really liked some of the 3D-incorporated scenes. (Pretty much, people complained about the 3D animation aspect that the movie combined with the popular 2D traditional style.) But that's not what I came here to complain about.

I'm just gonna say it now, Weathering with You was the most absurdly perfect movie I've ever seen. 10/10 artwork. 10/10 plot. 10/10 characters. 10/10 music. Obviously, this is just me. Personally, I liked it more than Your Name.

But we're getting off track. These two big movies (And of course I've yet to watch Garden of Words and many others, but I'll get to that soon probably lol) are too good in my opinion. When WWY came out I was surprised, because I didn't think Shinkai could get any better. YN was breathtaking, but WWY was just on another level. When Suzume came out, I was really hyped, to say the least. Suzume is good, don't get me wrong, but it's just not as . . . captivating as I thought it was going to be.

The plot itself is great. I have to applaud the humor, which I can tell had a lot of effort put into it compared to the previous two. Also, I adored the side characters (The tangerines girl and the bar lady, as well as many others). Each character in this story is given a lot of love, and it shows.

The plot is where it gets . . . messy. The story is a little too much, and I'm not saying the theme is, but the execution left a lot of stuff out. There's not really plot holes, persay, but it's more like the plot is so blurry that you can sense some holes but you can't really see them?

Plus, I felt like the climax was a little abrupt. I wished they dragged that out just a LIL bit longer.

Also, Souta as a chair cracks me up so much lol

And, I feel like Daijin carried the story. Most of the plot points is thanks to that smol catto. Speaking of Daijin, the whole part where Suzume realized that he wasn't actually opening the doors, and was in fact leading them to it was kind of strange and rushed. But he's cute. Love him

AND the song is amazing. I'll never get those 'doo DOO doo dododo doo dodo doo dodo doo dododoo's out of my head lol

The emotional aspect of the movie was 10/10 tho. For anyone dealing with loss and trauma this movie will definitely strike a cord. (Plus, lots of Japanese people were probably reminded of 3/11)

oh and thanks for coming to my ted talk

Mageheart

Spoiler! :

i feel you so much on YN not being the favorite film!! my brother is a big YN fan, but i saw Suzume and can't not love it. i think it's because i really love suzume's whole story about dealing with the trauma of the tsunami. my brother told me that his other works were inspired by that tsunami, but this is the first work where he actually outright addressed it. it also just worked so WELL with the context of the other stories being about disasters, too.

also souta as a chair really was 11/10, and i'm absolutely obsessed with some of the character designs in the movie-

Apr 17, 2023

yosh

Spoiler! :

YES the character designs were so on point like,,,, how is it possible to make everyone so beautiful?

Apr 17, 2023

Mageheart

Spoiler! :

YES

EVEN THE CHAIR-

Apr 19, 2023

yosh

Spoiler! :

esPECIALLY the chair

Apr 21, 2023

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yosh
Apr 12, 2023
Quillfeather, tatteredbones, Hijinks, looseleaf, momonster, Horisun, Meshugenah, Plume, winterwolf0100, Que, Dossereana, yosh, figmoon, Spearmint, alliyah, Mageheart, Coffeeboyjay, Kelisot

omg just had a nerve-wracking performance today!!! im a pianist, playing a concerto with a local symphony and omg it was so scary but so fun ahaha

i feel like imma write a poem about it but that would be kind of weird wouldn't it

Que Congrats!! That's fantastic and tbh a REALLY big moment. Which concerto?
Apr 12, 2023

yosh tyyyy!! <33

i played the first mvt of mendelssohns 1st concerto
Apr 12, 2023

Que Awesome! I haven't heard that one, but I'll give it a listen.
Apr 13, 2023

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yosh
Apr 10, 2023
Euphory, winterwolf0100, FireEyes, Spearmint, Dossereana, tatteredbones, BluesClues, Que, Kelisot

sometimes, turn around
and gaze into your mirror
and still feel like poop
yosh
Apr 8, 2023
Hijinks, FireEyes, figmoon, GengarIsBestBoy, Plume, Dossereana, winterwolf0100, BluesClues, Liminality, Mageheart, Que, Spearmint, Kelisot

LOOKS like i lost napo but hey it worked, i think i broke back into poetry again haha
yosh
Apr 7, 2023
PaigeFantasy, tatteredbones, Quillfeather, Spearmint, BluesClues, Plume, Hijinks, Liminality, winterwolf0100, Que, Dossereana, Mageheart, Kelisot

question for u ywsers. which mod/mod team do i ask questions about reviews n stuff like that? i have a serious question/concern about reviews

Omni You can reach out to any mod or use the Contact Mods button at the top ^^
Apr 7, 2023

Liminality Seconding Omni! Though if you have a question about reviews in a specific area of the Lit Center, Poetry Crew is for the Poetry Tab, and Gen Lit Crew is for the Novels and Shorts tab.
Apr 7, 2023
yosh
Apr 7, 2023
Mageheart, Stringbean, Que, figmoon, Spearmint, winterwolf0100, BluesClues, Plume, Hijinks, Dossereana

wrote two lil poMEs

cracks in the sidewalk

i wish you could hear my voice, even as i cry at my desktop
yosh
Apr 6, 2023
Mageheart, Hijinks, EsmerayaRose, figmoon, Dossereana, BluesClues, Que, Omni, Spearmint, winterwolf0100

here's my first attempt at some free-form poetry! Which will also be my April Madness submission, so good luck to everyone else in my block

i wish you could hear my voice, even as i cry at my desktop
yosh
Apr 4, 2023
Dossereana, Que, EsmerayaRose, BluesClues, Quillfeather, Horisun, Hijinks, alliyah, Spearmint, FireEyes, figmoon, winterwolf0100, Plume, DreamyAlice, Mageheart, tatteredbones

do you ever just look back at the very beginning of your wall and just cry about how embarrassing u were

Dossereana Many, Many times!!!!!
Apr 4, 2023

Quillfeather Literally made a post about this earlier
It's the worst feeling lol
Apr 4, 2023

ChesTacos dont remind me
Apr 4, 2023

Horisun Though I'm very thankful to this site for helping me learn how to conduct myself safely in an online space, looking back at those old posts is definitely something I try to avoid, lol
Apr 4, 2023

DreamyAlice don't tell me that you all were all cool people from the very beginning tho we all have some embarassing times and posts to remember TT
Apr 5, 2023

starshipgirl yes but my napo poems from two years ago actually make me cry-
Apr 5, 2023

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