But, I can't say that the butterflies aren't amusing me.
Spoiler
Shady's totally in.
"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus "From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf "A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni [they/he]
Important edit number two: the characters have been just told they're Trancers by a mysterious white haired man with sunglasses. He proves so by showing them The Trance.
No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it. — LCDR Geordi La Forge