Sneak-Peek of the new YWS

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Nate
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Mon Sep 15, 2008 2:35 am
Nate says... · Mon Sep 15, 2008 2:35 am
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Prokaryote
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Mon Sep 15, 2008 2:44 am
Prokaryote says... · Mon Sep 15, 2008 2:44 am
I don't get it. It looks the same.

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Bittersweet
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Mon Sep 15, 2008 3:05 am
Bittersweet says... · Mon Sep 15, 2008 3:05 am
Oh dear...

I think you should change the name to Five Year-Old Writers. FYOW?

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Mon Sep 15, 2008 3:12 am
BigBadBear says... · Mon Sep 15, 2008 3:12 am
Sexy new style. I like it.

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Would love help on this.




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Meshugenah
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Mon Sep 15, 2008 3:37 am
Meshugenah says... · Mon Sep 15, 2008 3:37 am
Lyke, zOMG! I LOoooooooooooooove it!

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Mon Sep 15, 2008 3:56 am
Teague says... · Mon Sep 15, 2008 3:56 am
I really think the squares should read "A.D.D."

*nod*

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Bittersweet
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Mon Sep 15, 2008 4:10 am
Bittersweet says... · Mon Sep 15, 2008 4:10 am
I second that one, Teague, dear.
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Mon Sep 15, 2008 5:08 am
Clo says... · Mon Sep 15, 2008 5:08 am
As long as the ads have that Raoul-looking Createspace man. I've grown attached to him. And Melissa and her goats.
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Mon Sep 15, 2008 10:02 am
Bella says... · Mon Sep 15, 2008 10:02 am
I like the grafopadipafjoapsdfj scribbley space ^.^
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Rydia
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Mon Sep 15, 2008 10:09 am
Rydia says... · Mon Sep 15, 2008 10:09 am
*Dies from laughter*
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Mon Sep 15, 2008 10:30 am
alwaysawriter says... · Mon Sep 15, 2008 10:30 am
This is funny. :)

I almost thought you were serious then I asked myself why it would be in Randomness if he was serious. Then I started laughing. I'm a little slow. :)
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Layleun
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Mon Sep 15, 2008 10:56 am
Layleun says... · Mon Sep 15, 2008 10:56 am
Ooh! I get the difference! There's an extra ad! *nod nod*




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piepiemann22
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Mon Sep 15, 2008 11:04 am
piepiemann22 says... · Mon Sep 15, 2008 11:04 am
Dude, the color kicks butt man. Wicked job. lol. This made my morning:)
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Chirantha
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Mon Sep 15, 2008 2:35 pm
Chirantha says... · Mon Sep 15, 2008 2:35 pm
Cool, but I think it would be under five year olds. Sorry Nate. :wink:

But I like it.
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Mon Sep 15, 2008 2:38 pm
Firestarter says... · Mon Sep 15, 2008 2:38 pm
The only bit I hate is the blue.
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