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Tue Dec 21, 2004 11:21 pm
Firestarter says... · Tue Dec 21, 2004 11:21 pm
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Nate wrote:And if YWS ever does become a company, Jack will be the President of European Operations. In fact, I'm just going to call him that anyways.




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Wed Dec 22, 2004 1:38 am
Perra says... · Wed Dec 22, 2004 1:38 am
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YWS gives me carpal tunnel.

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Wed Dec 22, 2004 2:50 am
bubblewrapped says... · Wed Dec 22, 2004 2:50 am
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Wed Dec 22, 2004 5:06 am
electricbluemonkey says... · Wed Dec 22, 2004 5:06 am
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Gotta a find a woman be good to me,
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Wed Dec 22, 2004 11:49 am
Firestarter says... · Wed Dec 22, 2004 11:49 am
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Nate wrote:And if YWS ever does become a company, Jack will be the President of European Operations. In fact, I'm just going to call him that anyways.




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Wed Dec 22, 2004 2:47 pm
niteowl says... · Wed Dec 22, 2004 2:47 pm
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Hey! Mim totally changed two letters!




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Wed Dec 22, 2004 9:15 pm
Firestarter says... · Wed Dec 22, 2004 9:15 pm
salt (got rid of the 'e' at last)
Nate wrote:And if YWS ever does become a company, Jack will be the President of European Operations. In fact, I'm just going to call him that anyways.



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