Lol. It was fine. You seemed a little too worried about pronunciation though. Accents are all about the sound. After you have that down, then you focus on a particular dialect.
I'm never what I like I'm double sided And I just can't hide I kind of like it When I make you cry 'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up Inside
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