Lol. It was fine. You seemed a little too worried about pronunciation though. Accents are all about the sound. After you have that down, then you focus on a particular dialect.
I'm never what I like I'm double sided And I just can't hide I kind of like it When I make you cry 'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up Inside
“And how shall I think of you?' He considered a moment and then laughed. 'Think of me with my nose in a book!” — Susanna Clarke, Jonathan Strange & Mr Norrell
