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Thu Nov 19, 2009 9:07 pm
AquaMarine says...



Ooooh, same contest as me. *narrows eyes*

No worries, it'll be done by tomorrow!


Kammie's is done, by the way!

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Fri Nov 20, 2009 11:04 pm
pinkangel54123 says...



Oh dear oh dear. I need a review. Can you review my first short story for me? Pretty please with cookies & sugar on top? It's called Reaper, and it's a science fiction-ish story. Thanks!
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Sat Nov 21, 2009 8:37 pm
AquaMarine says...



Gosh, I'm so sorry that I haven't got to it today! I promise to have it done tomorrow!
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Sun Nov 22, 2009 12:55 am
irishfire says...



Thanks so much for the review Aqua!! Its really appreciated :D

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Sun Nov 22, 2009 11:03 am
AquaMarine says...



Done, Pink! Hope it was some help.

And no problem, Irish. Good luck in the competition, even if I do want to win. :twisted:

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Thu Nov 26, 2009 5:15 pm
pudin.junidf says...



Aqua!
hey can you do me a favor?

Can you review this ne for me please?
It's called I'll Miss You My Dear Friend
Les sanglots longs
Des violons
De l'autonne
Blessent mon coeur
D'une langueur
Monotone.

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Fri Nov 27, 2009 10:55 pm
Stealth_Slicer says...



Hello.

Can you please review this for me?

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post623303.html#p623303

There is a bit of shooting but not really violence.

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Sat Nov 28, 2009 12:27 am
MKate says...



Hey Aqua, will you review a poem of mine?

I, um, don't really know how to post a link so... *cough*

It's in Narrative Poetry and it's called "Barbara Frietchie"

Thank you!
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Sat Nov 28, 2009 8:38 am
AquaMarine says...



No problem, guys! I'll do my best to get them all done today (definitely Pudin's because that's been here the longest) but I do need to writr 5,000 words this weekend so it might be done tomorrow!

And, Kate, to post a link simply copy and paste the link (htpp://www.youngwriterssociety ...) highlight it, and then click the URL button at the top there. Hopefully, it will now look something like:

[url}http:// etc etc etc[/url]

That help? :D

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Sat Nov 28, 2009 10:06 pm
MKate says...



Okay, let me try it out...

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic54977.html
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Sat Nov 28, 2009 10:09 pm
MKate says...



Wooohooo! :smt040

Thanks, Aqua!
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Sun Nov 29, 2009 2:03 pm
MissMiaFacinelli says...



Hey Amy!

Could you possibly review this for me? It's a short-ish piece of Narrative Poetry - I hope you like it!

Battlefields Eulogy

Thanks!

Mia x
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Sun Nov 29, 2009 5:17 pm
AquaMarine says...



Ok, so Pudin's is done. I was really, really flat out today so I haven't had any time at the moment. If I'm lucky then Stealth's and Kate's will be done tonight. If not then I promise they'll all be done tomorrow! Sorry, sorry, sorry.

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Sun Nov 29, 2009 9:01 pm
AquaMarine says...



Ok, scratch previous comment! I've done Kate's and Mia's. Stealth, I'm going to do your but you now have three chapters up so I'll work through them! Although I might skip the first one if it has enough comments.

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Sun Nov 29, 2009 10:40 pm
Hawkie says...



*pokes* I've never used one of these little threads. Let's see if it works . . .

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I just need a review on this one chapter. ^^








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