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Thu May 28, 2009 7:46 pm
Crouching Tuna says...



I will gladly review your work, just give me the location and I'll be there!

Will review any stories, especially fiction. I can't do prose, lyrics, and plays(is there such thing?), so please don't ask my review for that.

English may not be my first language, but I'm pretty good in reviewing your storylines, plots, structures, and the likes. I read plenty of books, but not all of them are English. If you want your story to be reviewed by someone not from American/European culture, I'm the right person to ask!

To be precise, I can review these quiet well:
-Fantasy
-Anything philosophical/lots of ideologies
-Big world/lots of character relationships
-RPG-feel stories
-Some analytical check to avoid paradoxes in complicated stories
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And...this will be my 2nd post here, which means I'm really new here, so I'm hoping you all would give me a shot with those reviews.

So......I'll be looking forward to your stories!

Hail Tuna!
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Fri May 29, 2009 12:10 am
Rascalover says...



Hey just wanna give you a happy welcome to YWS!

I really hope you can review my romantic fiction piece called Let Me Love You (chapter five)

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glad to be your first review?

-Tiffany
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Fri May 29, 2009 11:23 am
Sins says...



Hey x
Welcome to YWS!
Could you please review my fiction? :wink:
Thanks :D

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Thu Jun 04, 2009 10:59 am
Crouching Tuna says...



Hey!

I did Megan's piece,pretty cool!

@Rascal
I really don't know where to start, I guess I have to check out the previous chapters.



Sorry I couldn't find enough time for YWS, got lots of things to do like band practice for prom night, my last and hardest exam tomorrow, gaming tournament that's been going on(what a bad timing...).

I promise I'll have more time after friday, so please keep them coming!
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Thu Jun 04, 2009 1:57 pm
Lord Anzius says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic34323.html

The mansion chapter 1!!!!!
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Sat Jun 06, 2009 1:34 am
asxz says...



Please and thank you!

Chapter 4 [precie at begining]
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Sat Jun 06, 2009 4:12 am
youreit says...



Hey I have a piece in Romantic Fiction called Three Things, if you're interested.
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Sun Jun 07, 2009 5:01 am
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Could you please review please...
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Tue Jun 09, 2009 3:46 am
Crouching Tuna says...



Ok I finally did Rascal's piece, asxz's is also done.

The others, coming up!
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Wed Jun 07, 2023 7:04 am
DreamyAlice says...



Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries, if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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