Young Writers Society

Good day to you!

My name is Memento Mori and I am looking for works to review.

What I DON'T review: Poetry
Art
Hardcore Science Fiction (Aliens, etc. Slight science fiction is all right
Historical Fiction (I'm not very good with timelines and checking facts)
Angsty Fiction

Everything else is fair game.

What I will focus on: Spelling and Grammar
Repetitive Words
Rewording sentences to avoid the passive voice
Plot
Showing, not telling

I will give you an honest review, and if I don't like it I will tell you what didn't work for me.

I CAN'T tell you whether or not your character is realistic, but I can tell you if he/she is overdoing something, or doing nothing.

I will answer any questions you have about your piece or my review.

I don't really have a fee/anything to ask, but you can add me as a friend or drop an entry in my guestbook if you can take the time to. If not, then no worries!

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-ALICE