Young Writers Society

Heya all YWSers! I knew you wanted one!
Okay so here is my standards.
Genre's
Fantasy
Romantic
Poetry (though I'm not to good at it)
Fan-fic (As long as I've read the book)
Action/Adventure
Science
Art/Photography

Style
I tend to nitpick quite a bit. I'll give my opinion on how I liked it, what you could do to make it better, and confusing parts. I'll also add some tips about description, characters, and overall.

Some examples:

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Here

And Here


How to post
Please, tell me:
1. Title
2. Genre
3. Link

Yep... So since you wanted one post it here and I'll get right on it!
~Storm

Title: With Mankind as with Womankind
Genre: Romantic
Link: post537525.html?highlight=#537525


Thanks!

Title: Really?
Genre: Romantic
Link: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic46341.html

Hi! It's me (I know; I constantly bug you!)

1. Peanutgallery's NaPoWriMo Thread

2. It's poetry! (obviously)

3. topic46037.html


You can review if you want to... bye!

Pringles done!
Working on the others.
Keep them coming.

Kaila Marie's done! Awesome job, by the way.
Working on your's Peanut.

Finished yours peanut. Loved your poems! Anyone else up for a stormy review?

Title: Verboten a tribute to Helmuth Hubener
Genre: Narrative poetry
Link: topic46416.html

Thank you! The poem might seem a bit long, but I think it goes by fast.

Please review? ^_^

We burried the heroes.
Lyric Poetry
topic46432.html

Done with your's Poem. Sorry it took awhile.

[s]Onto Eraqio's.[/s] Done with Eriquo's!!!!

(Oh my. I seem to have a lot of poetry going on!)

Anyone else up for a Stormy Review????

Title: Faery Dancer #1
Genre: Uh, historical?
Link: topic46433.html


Thanks!

Done with yours TL G-Wooster, good job on that story. It was awesome!

Anyone else?

Title: The Court of Gilded Birds
Genre: Fantasy
Link: topic45981.html

All done!

*in desprate need of more work to review*

Please help me? =)

Stormy reviews right here~

Reviews, up for grabs!!!!!

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