Young Writers Society

Bonjour mon ami!
Commence ca va? Vous comme 'une révision' ?

Hello Everybody!

I decided I needed more reviews because it seems my number is bare to none, so if any of you would desire a review of mine, then just say so and I would be glad to do so.

I can not guarentee that you will get it today. It just all depends on my lack of ability to stay on the computer for so long, but if you do post, I guarentee you that you shall indeed get a review. Also, just to let you know, my reviews are more over critigues. Very lengthy I believe so, but very thorough. I have a whole awesome method in doing such which include my special analyzations!

1. Nit-picking.
2. Writing Style (Basically comments on your personal style of writing)
3. Characters
4. Miscellaneous (Grammer, punctuation, sentence structure, etc.)
5. Overall

Yes, I will take the time to go through my whole process.

Also, if your piece already has a lot of reviews, I will most likely not fully critique it because I don't like to repeat what other people have already said. So give me stories that actually need some good reviews!

Well I hope to get going!

~Incognito

If you really want to do some good on the great reviewers front, then you could check out An Angel Dropped, my newest piece. Its a contest submission so your opinion would be awesome.

Hey, could you review this for me.
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It's in other fiction. There is a prologue, read it if you want but you don't need to. It's pretty self explanatory. Since, it's only the first part after the prologue. Anyways, if you could help I'd really appreciate it!

I certainly will take a gander at both of those. You will get my response soon enough!

~Incognito

Hi,
I'd like a review for my story "Like a Button". The first half I'm pretty please with but the second half needs work.

Here is the link:

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Love,
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