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Gender: Female
Points: 1656
Reviews: 122
Sun Jan 25, 2009 2:44 pm
WaterVyper says...



Yep, I'm starting one of these. I'll be doing reviews on just about anything. So, lemme get to the specifics.

What I'll review: Pretty much anything. Poetry, fiction, screenplays, whatever you need. As long as it isn't fanfiction, I'll probably go for it. If fanfiction, I might need a bit of prodding to get started on it, especially if I don't know what it's about. So, yeah, that's it.

What to expect: Mostly, I'll do grammar critiques. I wouldn't go as far as to call myself a Grammar Nazi, but I'll twitch whenever I see grammar mistakes. That's why I tend to avoid IM. Also, I can go with plot development, and trivia. You know, like little mistakes such as hearing a bullet before being shot, constant full moon, stuff like that. Character development, not so much. Just don't ask me for anything about romance, please. I can review it, but I can't develop it. So don't ask.

Price: Nothing at all. After I get points from a review, I don't really want anything else. Although donations are nice. Not hinting at anything, no matter what you think.

Other notes: If you have a date when you want the review done, go ahead and include it. I'll get to it as soon as possible. If I can't meet the deadline, then I'll PM you. Sorry if it doesn't seem that professional. Ah yes, could you put your request in this format?

Name of work:
Link:
Genre:
Date (optional):

Anything else you want to add is up to you.


Waiting list:


Completed list:
asxz
Serendipity Blues
boltageman
Last edited by WaterVyper on Sun Mar 15, 2009 9:44 am, edited 2 times in total.
There once was a cat.
He wasn’t particularly fat.
Fuzzy was his favorite mat.
And really, that was that.

Oh, but did you really think so?
Keep reading, it’s just the start of the show!
And as for how far this tale will go…
Well, even the cat doesn’t know.





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Mon Mar 02, 2009 6:08 am
asxz says...



Oh, You haven't got any reviews yet! BUMP!
Could you please review this for me?
::XoX::KeepWriting::XoX::

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Writing is 3% talent and 97% not being distracted by the internet





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Mon Mar 02, 2009 9:06 am
Serendipity Blues says...



Oh, could you please review [url=http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic44562.html]this[/i] for me. It's something new!

Thank yooou!
Fancy a Review?

Moo.





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Sun Mar 08, 2009 2:17 pm
WaterVyper says...



Request completed, asxz. I'll get to work on yours, Serendipity.
There once was a cat.
He wasn’t particularly fat.
Fuzzy was his favorite mat.
And really, that was that.

Oh, but did you really think so?
Keep reading, it’s just the start of the show!
And as for how far this tale will go…
Well, even the cat doesn’t know.





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Points: 4759
Reviews: 39
Thu Mar 12, 2009 3:45 am
Bloo says...



If you could do this it would be great.

topic44924.html

Its a fantasy fiction, though it does not have much Magic yet.

and thanks in advanced.
That User Who Changed Their Name A Dozen Times And So No One Ever Knew Who They Were Half the Time and When They Did Only Used Bolt.

The tragic tale of losing all #Brand for nothing in return.

The Take Away Is You Probably Know Me As Bolt





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Tue Jun 06, 2023 8:47 am
DreamyAlice says...



Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries, if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

-ALICE
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