Young Writers Society

Hello y'all! If you are looking for critiques on your stories, then you have come to the right place.

What I will critique:
-Stories that are:
a) Fantasy
b) Sci-fic
c) Romance
d) Adventure
--Basically, I'll review all types of stories except horror (with rare exceptions). I prefer to have stories completely devoid of vampires/ect, but if you are desperate..


What I won't critique:
-Poetry. Seriously. I would have no idea what to say.
-Photography.

Misc.
-The shorter the better, you'll get a critique faster that way
-Please only ask for one critique at a time

About my critiquing
-I am not the best, I'll tell you right now. I will try to point out stuff on your plot, and the general feel of characters. I will also point out grammatical errors, and basically anything that I see. And hey, practice makes perfect

Hm, no-one?
Granted my title isn't catchy, but I suck at coming up with catchy titles...

Can't believe people have ignored such a generous offer.
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Please and thankyou.

You can critique me!
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It's action and it's about a boy who is kidnapped serial killer so IDK if that would be considered horror for you or not. (There are no vampires, sparkly or otherwise, in it =])

Hope you enjoy it!

This is a prologue to my fantasy story.


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Please and thank you.

Ek!
I forgot to check this thread, and all of the sudden its blossomed!
So, I have major tryouts tomorrow, but I'll try and get y'alls reviews done as soon as possible.

Ducati- Done!

luverly- Done!
By the way, sorry I went out of order, I didn't realize that RGallagher was first

Okay! Sorry ever so much. We were just hit with the ice storm of the century, and power has been out at my house, which is why I have not been able to critique your story, RGallagher. Since I'm at a place with internet connections, I'll try and get that critique done, but if I don't, I'm sorry.

Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries, if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

-ALICE