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Sun Jan 04, 2009 12:54 am
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OverEasy says...



After becoming a member of the purps I have decided that I review far too little, when I should be reviewing far too much ;).

What I am best at:

Poetry (all forms),

Romantic Fiction (preferably shorter pieces, my mind tends to wander after a while no matter how good it is :P)

What I am worst at, but will still do if forced:

Science Fiction,

Fantasy Fiction,

Action/Adventure.


What I won't do:

Art and photography (unless you want a review that says, err, it looks great?),

Scripts
(sorry guys, I know nothing about them),

FanFiction (there are few circumstances where I will, if you are desperate send a PM my way and we'll talk.


What I focus on

Poetry

First Impressions, Basic Tone, anything else I feel needs to be mentioned. Example


Romantic Fiction

First Impressions, Character(s), Dialogue, and Plot (Example coming soon)



No posting more than one piece at one time

No asking me to review chapter 13, start me on number one, and we'll go from there.
Life is for living.





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Sun Jan 04, 2009 12:57 am
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Juniper says...



Eggs does "Other fiction," Ja?

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Pretty please review my "Pavo"? It's very rough ^^.
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Reviews: 42
Sun Jan 04, 2009 1:11 am
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Ducati says...



I have some poetry for you, since you seem to like it so much.
topic41215.html
Please review the edited version, I'm thinking of submitting it to the YWS journal. :D
When you look at your life, in a strange new room, maybe drowning soon, is this the start of it all?





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Sun Jan 04, 2009 10:58 am
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WaterVyper says...



Hi, OverEasy! Could you please do my poem? I've submitted it on another site, but I haven't gotten any comments for it.

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There once was a cat.
He wasn’t particularly fat.
Fuzzy was his favorite mat.
And really, that was that.

Oh, but did you really think so?
Keep reading, it’s just the start of the show!
And as for how far this tale will go…
Well, even the cat doesn’t know.





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Sun Apr 16, 2023 6:52 am
DreamyAlice says...



Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries, if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

-Alice
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