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Good day YWSers!

I have free time. I can critique. All I lack is self-motivation!

So! To get around this nasty obstacle, just tell me what you want critiquing. I've not been very active on the review front for a while, so here's your chance to help me get back on track. There's just one thing I won't do.

WARNING:

Charlie cannot will not critique poetry.

Sorry YWS Poets, but my services don't come in that colour.

But! To balance this out, I will accept any style, any genre, and any length pieces. Just reply to this post with a link and I'll get to work right away. So, what are you waiting for?

EDIT: 11/07/08
-- It appears that my critiques have moved away from being "Grammar Nazi Rampages" to "General Impressions and Writing Lessons". Trust me. You need one of these. Reply to the thread, now!

Yours,
Charlie

alright you beat it out of me

In my portfolio under "Canaby Witches" is five delicious chapters waiting to be read, please comment at least and tell me what you thought of them

thanks

---Jon---

I hate to have to ask, but I was wondering if you could do a crit of the first chapter I wrote of an action/adventure novel I wrote.

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It's not long at all, but I need some serious help with it. It's in first-draft mode and everything.

Thank you very much!

xxfourthelement

xxfourthelement

Yayness, I got round to your piece! It was a pleasure to read, the critique was maybe a little harsh, but I figure you'll be thankful when you've made the piece ten times better!

Please, please, please post the other chapters' links in here and I'll review them too, if you're ok with it! I'm awful at remembering by myself, so if you leave the links here then I can't fail!

[EDIT]

wisemann210

The first chapter of the five is critiqued. I'm afraid my body is screaming for sleep now, so I'll see about the other chapters in the next few days. Thank you also for coming forward and requesting critiques! I loved the Canaby Sisters, but I want to see a lot more effort on your part concerning spelling and grammar.

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And to all you out there who have yet to post, check out my crit for xxfourthelement and see if you want the same services!

Yours,
Charlie

Night Terrors

I have just posted this and wondered if I could get some reviews?

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If you have some time! It's first part of a murder investigation. Not too long!
Thanks =]

Could you do this: topic33149.html ?

Thanks!

Hey. You were asking me if I had something for you to review... a long time ago. Well, I do now, if you could. I'd be grateful forever. xD

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Thank you. ^_^

Hey if you could review chapter 3 or 4 (or both ) of this story: topic32338.html that'd be awesome. I'd prefer if you read the first two chapters, but you don't have to review them unless you want to. I'm not as much concerned about grammar errors (though I know I make them), as much as general story/character/plot comments. But honestly, review how you normally do. Thanks a lot, I appreciate this!

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