Young Writers Society

Anyway, what I will critique:
Mostly anything!



[u]What I specialize in
Dialougue
Emotion
Fantasy
Detail
Poetry
Realism
Structure

I'm looking to help!

---Jon---

*Moved to "Review for Food"*

will you reveiw

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???

done, next?

Night Terrors

I have just posted this and wondered if I could get some reviews?

done jared, it was great!!!!!!!

next???

ah hem *clears throat*, i said next!
.............. please

---Jon---

people!, i need things to critique, please

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^If you manage to review that today, I will be your bestest friend ever. But whenever you get to it is fine too. =P Thanks in advance!

^_^

Edit: Or no. *sees the story has been deleted* =P PM if you have something you'd like a review on. XD

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Thanks!

done and done

next?

Do you want to do the first chapter of 'Magic Carpet Ride' for me?

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P.S Canaby Witches, finished it, forgot to PM you, I really like it. I think dialogue is your strongest point, it is all so natural

done, next please
---Jon---

I'm not hungrey. It looks like you are.

I said next!

But here. This one you can burn.

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done amber, next please

---Jon---