Young Writers Society

I'm not going to waste a lot of time on an introduction to this thread; we both know why you're here. So, here's a brief list of what I will and will not critique.

Prose
I will review prose of any rating.
I prefer that the prose be less than 3,000 words.
I will not review prose in the following genres: Historical Fiction, Fanfiction, and Non-Fiction.
Poetry
I will review poetry that has a consistent rhyme scheme and meter.
I will not review free-form poetry.

I will not review photography or lyrics or any of that other stuff, nor will I review anything in the Advanced Critiques forum at this time.

Waiting List:
Prose
1. Open
2. Open
3. Open
Poetry
1. Open
2. Open
3. Open

Currently:
Accepting

Post away.
<3Rabbit

EDIT:
Be sure to let me know if there's anything specific you'd like me to look at when reviewing your piece.

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Not sure how many words this is, but it's several chapters. I'd appreciate it if you could give me an overall impression of the whole thing as far as it's got - what you think of the characters, whether you'd read more, what you think might happen, what you like, what you don't like, stuff like that.

Thanks!

I can give you an overall, though I won't be able to do much real in-depth work with so much story to read. I do have one question, though... is the first chapter missing? I printed it from one of the quoted sections, so that I could get the whole story, but I'm assuming that you're not wanting any comments on it?

Nah, the first chapter is the one that starts with the Gandhi quote -- "Drych-ddelwedd." Start from there and work down.

*puts on overall* Overall's are brilliant, thanks!

Can you please look at The Scient Witch please?

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I have problems with dialogue so could please give me some pointers on that?

Thank you!

Just a note for the two of you:
I'm super, super busy today. Like, hella.
Long story short, I won't be posting any reviews today, but I've printed your stories out and I'm looking them over, and I should have responses for both of you by the end of tomorrow or early the next day.

Oh wise Professor Rabbit...

I need any reviews whatsoever. Could you pick anything out of my portfolio as you so desire?

Okay, story slots are full until I get all three reviews done. I'll still accept poetry; just remember that I hate free-form. I like poems with strict rhyme schemes and consistent meters. Like a villanelle or a sonnet, for example.

TLG and clo are done!
Two slots now open for prose, three for poetry.
Spazz, I'll be working on your review this afternoon.

Still open!

Can I request the next chapter of Scavenger?

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I put in your suggestions about the feathers, by the way. ^_^

Done again, TL, and please do let me know when there's another chapter!

Still open, folks.

Okay, could you please review my story? It's the beginning of a novel, but I haven't worked on it in a while. I want to know if I should keep working or let it drop. Oh, and it's supposed to be horror, but I'm not sure how scary it will actually get, and this is just the beginning so it probably won't be at all. Thanks!

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A customer!

( wait what's your rush what's your hurry you gave me such a fright i thought you was a ghost half a minute can't you sit sit you down sit all i meant is that i haven't seen a customer for weeks )

*ahem*

...I'll get on it.