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Mon Jun 23, 2008 8:05 pm
deleted2 says...



So. Reviews.

Any work in need of critiques, my dears?

What I'll review:

Adventure/Action Fiction

Historical Fiction

Romance Fiction

Other Fiction

Science Fiction

Yes, basically all fiction except Fanfiction :wink:

More than one part?

You may post up to three pieces at a time, and then you'll have to wait until I've done those before you can ask me for more. Seems reasonable enough, yes? ^^

I don't mind if you want the first chapters of a longer story reviewed - it's cool with me. In fact, I may even follow up on the story myself if you manage to draw me in enough. I won't, though, start at chapter seven of a story, for I'll be lost in the storyline. So, start me at the very beginning, guys.

How I review?

Well, I either give overall comments, or nitpicks. I can even shred the piece for you, if you so desire. If you have no specific review requirements, I'll go with the general nitpicks+overall comments format.

If there's anything specific (grammar, vocabulary, description, flow, etc) then let me know.

So what do I have to do?

All you have to do is leave a comment. Please mention the forum it's in, the wordcount, and what type of review/how harsch a review it is that you want. And don't forget to add in the link!

Reviews:
[s]JFW1415
SunshineOrange
thunder_dude7
Anti-Pop[/s]
[s]Conrad Rice[/s]
[s]TGL-Wooster[/s]
[s]BigBadBear[/s]
[s]Conrad Rice[/s]
[s]BlackCatSachiko[/s]
[s]Asxz[/s]
[s]KJ[/s]
[s]RoseyUnicorn[/s]
Ember
CaseySaz


*Pending - waiting for replies*
PenguinAttack




To those who I have neglected since November, I'm very sorry. I've sent out PM's to ask if the works are still in need of reviews, and they're at the top of my To-Do list if they say yes.

Homework floods shall not keep me from reviewing again, I promise ^^

XxxDo
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Mon Jun 23, 2008 8:19 pm
Cpt. Smurf says...



***MOVED***

Keep these review requests to the Will Review For Food forum.
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Mon Jun 23, 2008 9:13 pm
deleted2 says...



Oh, oops! Sorry bout that. :)

XxxDo





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Sat Jun 28, 2008 12:16 am
JFW1415 says...



You keep asking for something, so here you go! And it's nice and short!

Out of Focus

Thanks! I'll get to your stuff shortly, m'dear. :)

~JFW1415





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Sun Sep 21, 2008 3:45 pm
deleted2 says...



*Bumps thread*

Come on guys!!

FREE REVIEWS!!

:D

XxxDo





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Sat Sep 27, 2008 12:37 pm
SunshineOrange says...



Well, I'll be more than happy if you review the first chapter of my Fantasy Fiction; dont worry, it's a quick fire chaptered novel so each are pretty short.

:) << Click Meee.

If you want any reviews yourself, please post them on my review forum, by clicking the link in my signature.

:D
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Sat Sep 27, 2008 1:15 pm
thunder_dude7 says...



:smt100

Thanks for the idea, Sunshine! I didn't realise you could link smilies.

Anyway, I'd really appreciate a critique. I could use them.





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Sat Sep 27, 2008 1:29 pm
deleted2 says...



Sunshine, your review is done! Go check it out :wink:

Thunder, I'm off to review your work right this minute !

XxxDo

Edit : Thunder, your review is done! :D





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Mon Sep 29, 2008 8:41 pm
deleted2 says...



*Bumps thread again*

People, give me work?

XxxDo





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Mon Sep 29, 2008 9:46 pm
Conrad Rice says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic34833.html

If you could rip this apart, I would appreciate it.
Garrus Vakarian is my homeboy.





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Sat Oct 04, 2008 10:50 am
deleted2 says...



Con; I'm looking at it as we speak :D

XxxDo





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Sat Oct 04, 2008 11:54 am
PenguinAttack says...



Would you mind terribly, please?

The Space Between.

*Hearts* Le Penguin.
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Wed Oct 15, 2008 10:14 pm
deleted2 says...



I will get reviewing asap, guys, I'm sorry.

IB is drowning me in homework ... o.0

XxxDo





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Tue Oct 28, 2008 11:34 pm
Twit says...



When you've recovered from your homework flood, please! :D

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Wed Oct 29, 2008 4:22 pm
deleted2 says...



^^ Haha !

I'm actually still recovering. It's been a homework tsunami...

:roll:

But... soon I'll review the stories!

Promise!

XxxDo








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