Young Writers Society

OK. So, I'll review any of your thingies. Anything at all. A short story? A play? Poems? Lyrics? Yeah, sure. Just gimmie one per person, and I'll be, in the words of Lester Bangs, honest and unmerciful.

Hey!

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Please and Thank You!

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Danke schon.

Done and done.

Hey, mind critiquing mine? It' called "Saving Michael", and can be found under Fantasy, though here's the link:

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Hey, Icaruss, Invasion of the Penis Snatchers hasn't gotten much attention. It could use your acid wit.

Dudes. Done and done. Gimmie some more.

Please?

Suicide Kills Us All

Rip it to shreds.

~JFW1415

Donísimmo.

Dude, I'm all, like, asking people for crits, and they're all, like, your story sucks! and you should totally, like, nix this thing, and I'm all, like, dude, I want to give something back to the community, and this thread is all, like, totally about that, you know?

So give some more stories to do, man.

hi, I'd like three chapters reviewed:

chapter 1: topic31592.html

2. topic31611.html

3. topic31673.html

it's HSM\AATC fanfiction, so watch out!
MATT

and here is the 4th: topic31692.html
MATT

*Poke*

You're tough, but that's what I need. I may just avoid you when I read the critique, though.

Out of Focus

Thanks so much!

~JFW1415

EDIT: That's now edited a bunch, and I would love your feedback. Let me know when I can return the favor!

Haven't checked this in ages. I will be doing JFW1415's piece and any others that are posted after this (sorry spaced_out but I haven't the slightest idea what HSM is).

I've been gone for the last few weeks (read my blog), but that's not really why I haven't done many crits. I'm just a lazy bugger. Force me into shape. Please.

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This is a really short piece that people seem to love, it has gotten gold stars from everyone so It wont be too much work.

It is a poem, very short.

Thank You

---Jon---

Hey. I love your critiques. They're so fantastic! You should apply to be an Instructor, dude.

Anyway. To add to your list to do:

I Love My Dirt; My Dirt Loves Me

Feel free to do what you like with it.

-Jared