Young Writers Society

Come get your fiction critiques here, folks! Post a link to the piece and I'll get to it as soon as I possibly can!

Please, fiction or artwork/photography only. I fail at life with poetry. ^^

I'm open to critiquing a story as it progresses, and critiquing revisions as well!

I'm doing something crazy!

I crunched the numbers and found out that I need 800~ more critiques to get 5 red stars. I really want to be the 3rd member to achieve that, so I've set a goal! If I do 11 critiques a day for 11 weeks, I'll have hit my goal by July! Obviously, I'm going to need *loads* of critting fodder, so request as many pieces as you like! Please!

To-Do Critiques

Runaway
Tree Draft 2
Arieda's Photos
Five Bars in Rome: A Letter to an American Soldier
Azaleas for Susie

Finished Critiques

Chance of Snow P1
Gates of Glendon -- Prologue
Gates of Glendon Ch. 1 & 2
Fantasizing

Check back here to see where your critique is!

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Chance of Snow P1

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Thanks.

Updated 26.3.08

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http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic28301.html

I'll love you forever! Thanks!

~JFW1415

Updated 20.4.08

I'd do more, but I have to leave. The rest'll be done tonight. xD

I'm doing something crazy!

I crunched the numbers and found out that I need 800~ more critiques to get 5 red stars. I really want to be the 3rd member to achieve that, so I've set a goal! If I do 11 critiques a day for 11 weeks, I'll have hit my goal by July! Obviously, I'm going to need *loads* of critting fodder, so request as many pieces as you like! Please!

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Awesome!

Crit me!

There's some fodder for you.

Updated again!

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Hi Saint!

If you want to do a quick, easy review, I have a bunch of old pictures and a couple of new ones on this thread HERE, so even if you just give a line or two about a couple of the photos, you still get a shiny review tagged onto your count. (Which is totally cool with me. Don't feel like you need to comment on every picture. In fact, don't, because then I have to flip back and forth from the different pages. XD )

And here are a couple of cheery stories to brighten your day:

Five Bars in Rome: Letter to an American Soldier

Azaleas for Susie

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic28900.html

This is due really soon, and has three parts. Could you please do this soon? I'm not looking for a really detailed critique. I just need someone to glance at it quickly. I think I may have worked out most of the kinks - this is the revised version.

Thanks so much!

~JFW1415

Hey Saint!

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Please and Thank You!

Hello!

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Thanks! ^_^

Well you still don't have any red stars, so heres something. It's a song I wrote:

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Also, you critiqued the first five chapters of How You Break My Heart. The last two chapters are also up, if you want to crit them.

Thanks!

Check it out if you have the time!

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RG

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic34833.html

If you could rip this to shreds, I would be very happy.